版本: v1.0
日期: 2025-02-17
目标: 将优质故事逆向拆解成 AI 可学习的思考步骤
宏观层(故事整体): MICE线程管理 + Save the Cat节拍
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中观层(章节段落): 起承转合 + 爽点钩子布局
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微观层(场景细节): Scene-Sequel结构
不是简单地"从大纲到正文",而是提取作者的思考过程(Chain of Thought):
{
"mice_threads": [
{
"thread_id": "M001",
"type": "Milieu",
"priority": 2,
"opening": {
"chapter": 1,
"position": 0.01,
"trigger": "主角进入新世界的标志性事件",
"description": "许七安在监狱中醒来,发现穿越到大奉王朝"
},
"development": [
{
"chapter": 2,
"event": "了解京兆府衙门的运作",
"world_building": "官场生态、权力结构"
},
{
"chapter": 7,
"event": "进入京城繁华街道",
"world_building": "社会风貌、文化特色"
}
],
"closing": {
"chapter": null,
"position": null,
"trigger": "主角离开或完全融入这个世界",
"status": "未关闭"
},
"nesting_level": 1
},
{
"thread_id": "I001",
"type": "Idea",
"priority": 3,
"opening": {
"chapter": 1,
"position": 0.15,
"question": "现代刑侦方法能否在古代仙侠世界有效?",
"description": "许七安思考如何用现代知识破案"
},
"development": [
{
"chapter": 4,
"partial_answer": "可以,通过逻辑推理发现破绽",
"evidence": "时间和重量的矛盾"
},
{
"chapter": 5,
"partial_answer": "可以,通过化学知识制造证据",
"evidence": "金属钠实验"
}
],
"closing": {
"chapter": 6,
"position": 0.06,
"answer": "完全可以,现代科学思维在古代同样有效",
"status": "阶段性关闭"
},
"nesting_level": 3
},
{
"thread_id": "C001",
"type": "Character",
"priority": 2,
"opening": {
"chapter": 1,
"position": 0.05,
"dissatisfaction": "不满于即将被流放的命运",
"description": "许七安从现代警察变成古代阶下囚,身份认同危机"
},
"development": [
{
"chapter": 1,
"stage": "求生欲驱动",
"internal_conflict": "恐惧vs希望"
},
{
"chapter": 4,
"stage": "展现能力",
"internal_conflict": "自我怀疑vs自信"
},
{
"chapter": 7,
"stage": "融入家庭",
"internal_conflict": "陌生感vs归属感"
},
{
"chapter": 10,
"stage": "确立价值观",
"internal_conflict": "摸鱼vs坚持正义"
}
],
"closing": {
"chapter": null,
"position": null,
"resolution": "接受新身份或改变命运",
"status": "未关闭"
},
"nesting_level": 2
},
{
"thread_id": "E001",
"type": "Event",
"priority": 1,
"opening": {
"chapter": 1,
"position": 0.03,
"disruption": "税银失窃,朝野震动,许家面临灭顶之灾",
"description": "世界的正常秩序被打破"
},
"development": [
{
"chapter": 2,
"escalation": "发现'妖物作祟',案件更加复杂"
},
{
"chapter": 4,
"turning_point": "许七安提出新思路,案件出现转机"
},
{
"chapter": 5,
"climax": "实验成功,真相大白"
}
],
"closing": {
"chapter": 6,
"position": 0.06,
"resolution": "许家获释,秩序恢复",
"new_order": "许七安地位提升,获得认可",
"status": "已关闭"
},
"nesting_level": 4
}
],
"nesting_structure": "M[ I[ C[ E[ ]E ]C ]I ]M",
"validation": "valid"
}
作者的MICE决策:
选择主线程: 为什么选择Event作为最外层?
嵌套顺序: 为什么Character在Event内部?
快速关闭: 为什么第6章就关闭Event线程?
{
"story_length_words": 1000000,
"beats": [
{
"beat_number": 1,
"beat_name": "Opening Image",
"target_position_percent": 1,
"actual_position_percent": 0.5,
"actual_chapter": 1,
"actual_word_count": 5000,
"description": "许七安在监狱中醒来,面临流放",
"function": "展示主角变化前的状态",
"emotional_state": "绝望、恐惧",
"world_state": "混乱、危机",
"author_intent": "立即建立紧张感,倒计时压力"
},
{
"beat_number": 2,
"beat_name": "Theme Stated",
"target_position_percent": 5,
"actual_position_percent": 4,
"actual_chapter": 1,
"actual_word_count": 40000,
"description": "许七安思考:'现代刑侦手段能否在这个世界有效?'",
"function": "暗示主题:科学vs玄学,现代vs古代",
"theme": "理性思维的力量",
"author_intent": "埋下核心冲突的种子"
},
{
"beat_number": 4,
"beat_name": "Catalyst",
"target_position_percent": 10,
"actual_position_percent": 8,
"actual_chapter": 1,
"actual_word_count": 80000,
"description": "堂弟许新年带来卷宗",
"function": "提供破局的可能性",
"emotional_shift": "从绝望到希望萌生",
"author_intent": "给主角(和读者)一线生机"
},
{
"beat_number": 6,
"beat_name": "Break into Two",
"target_position_percent": 20,
"actual_position_percent": 15,
"actual_chapter": 2,
"actual_word_count": 150000,
"description": "许七安决定用现代推理破案",
"function": "主角主动选择,进入新阶段",
"commitment": "从被动等死到主动求生",
"author_intent": "建立主角的主动性"
},
{
"beat_number": 8,
"beat_name": "Fun and Games",
"target_position_percent": 35,
"actual_position_percent": 30,
"actual_chapter": 4,
"actual_word_count": 300000,
"description": "展示推理过程,化学实验",
"function": "前提的承诺:现代知识碾压古代",
"reader_expectation": "看主角如何用现代知识装逼",
"author_intent": "密集爽点,满足读者期待"
}
],
"emotional_arc": [
{"position_percent": 0, "level": 2, "state": "绝望"},
{"position_percent": 10, "level": 4, "state": "希望"},
{"position_percent": 20, "level": 5, "state": "决心"},
{"position_percent": 35, "level": 8, "state": "兴奋"},
{"position_percent": 50, "level": 9, "state": "高潮"},
{"position_percent": 60, "level": 6, "state": "平静"},
{"position_percent": 75, "level": 3, "state": "低谷"},
{"position_percent": 85, "level": 7, "state": "顿悟"},
{"position_percent": 100, "level": 10, "state": "满足"}
]
}
作者的节拍决策:
提前触发: 为什么Catalyst在8%而非10%?
压缩Debate: 为什么几乎没有犹豫阶段?
提前高潮: 为什么第5-6章就达到高潮?
{
"chapter_id": "chapter_004",
"chapter_title": "是时候表演真正的技术了",
"word_count": 3500,
"structure": {
"起": {
"position": "0-500字",
"function": "建立场景和冲突",
"content": "许七安求见府尹,被狱卒阻拦",
"hook": "他有重要线索能破案",
"emotional_setup": "紧张、期待"
},
"承": {
"position": "500-2000字",
"function": "展开冲突,增加难度",
"content": "陈府尹暴躁,几乎要杖责;许七安展示推理",
"escalation": [
"府尹不信",
"要打板子",
"中年男人制止",
"开始推理"
],
"emotional_development": "从紧张到自信"
},
"转": {
"position": "2000-3000字",
"function": "反转,超出期待",
"content": "用数学计算和时间推理揭示破绽",
"reversal": "官员们从怀疑到震惊",
"shuang_point": "智商碾压,古代人算不出来",
"emotional_peak": "爽、兴奋"
},
"合": {
"position": "3000-3500字",
"function": "解决当前冲突,引出新钩子",
"content": "官员们认可推理,但需要证据",
"resolution": "获得做实验的机会",
"new_hook": "能否成功制造金属钠?",
"emotional_closure": "满足但期待下一步"
}
},
"author_thinking": {
"why_this_structure": "快速推进,不拖泥带水",
"pacing_decision": "承部分占比最大,充分展示推理过程",
"hook_strategy": "每个'合'都要引出新'起'"
}
}
{
"shuang_point_types": [
{
"type_id": "SP001",
"type_name": "智商碾压",
"mechanism": "主角用知识/智慧碾压对手",
"setup_requirements": [
"建立对手的无知或错误认知",
"主角掌握对手不知道的信息",
"有旁观者见证"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"展示知识的过程",
"对手的震惊反应",
"旁观者的惊叹"
],
"intensity_factors": {
"low": "小知识点,对手轻微惊讶",
"medium": "重要知识,对手震惊",
"high": "颠覆性知识,对手三观崩塌"
},
"example": {
"chapter": 4,
"setup": "官员们认为税银被妖物劫走",
"payoff": "许七安用数学计算证明时间和重量矛盾",
"reaction": "'竟然是这样!'中年男人猛的站起身",
"intensity": "high"
}
},
{
"type_id": "SP002",
"type_name": "打脸",
"mechanism": "对手嘲讽→主角反击→对手后悔",
"setup_requirements": [
"对手的轻视或嘲讽",
"主角隐藏实力或被误解",
"有明确的对抗场景"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"主角展示真实实力",
"对手的震惊和尴尬",
"身份或地位的反转"
],
"intensity_factors": {
"low": "小配角被打脸",
"medium": "重要配角被打脸",
"high": "大反派或权威被打脸"
},
"example": {
"chapter": 4,
"setup": "陈府尹怒喝'胡说八道,拖下去杖责'",
"payoff": "许七安的推理让府尹无话可说",
"reaction": "府尹从暴躁到沉默",
"intensity": "medium"
}
},
{
"type_id": "SP003",
"type_name": "升级",
"mechanism": "能力提升,实力飞跃",
"setup_requirements": [
"建立当前实力的局限",
"铺垫升级的可能性",
"制造升级的契机"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"升级的仪式感",
"新能力的展示",
"他人的认可"
],
"intensity_factors": {
"low": "小幅提升",
"medium": "境界突破",
"high": "质的飞跃"
}
},
{
"type_id": "SP004",
"type_name": "装逼",
"mechanism": "展示实力,引发惊叹",
"setup_requirements": [
"隐藏实力",
"有展示的场景",
"有旁观者"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"实力展示的过程",
"旁观者的震惊",
"主角的淡定"
]
},
{
"type_id": "SP005",
"type_name": "获得",
"mechanism": "获得宝物/技能/资源",
"setup_requirements": [
"建立获得物的价值",
"制造获得的难度",
"展示获得的过程"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"获得的惊喜",
"获得物的描述",
"他人的羡慕"
]
},
{
"type_id": "SP006",
"type_name": "碾压",
"mechanism": "实力差距,轻松获胜",
"setup_requirements": [
"建立敌人的强大",
"主角实力更强",
"有战斗场景"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"轻松获胜的过程",
"敌人的绝望",
"旁观者的震惊"
]
}
]
}
{
"chapter_id": "chapter_004",
"word_count": 3500,
"shuang_points": [
{
"sp_id": "SP_C4_001",
"type": "打脸",
"position_word": 500,
"position_percent": 14,
"intensity": "medium",
"setup": {
"start_word": 300,
"content": "陈府尹怒喝'胡说八道'",
"setup_length": 200
},
"payoff": {
"start_word": 500,
"content": "中年男人制止,许七安开始推理",
"payoff_length": 300
},
"reaction": {
"character": "陈府尹",
"reaction": "从暴躁到沉默"
}
},
{
"sp_id": "SP_C4_002",
"type": "智商碾压",
"position_word": 2000,
"position_percent": 57,
"intensity": "high",
"setup": {
"start_word": 1500,
"content": "官员们算不出白银重量",
"setup_length": 500
},
"payoff": {
"start_word": 2000,
"content": "许七安秒算:九千三百七十五斤",
"payoff_length": 200
},
"reaction": {
"character": "中年男人",
"reaction": "猛的站起身,'竟然是这样!'"
},
"author_comment": "速算能力有点Low啊,你们这群古代人"
},
{
"sp_id": "SP_C4_003",
"type": "智商碾压",
"position_word": 2800,
"position_percent": 80,
"intensity": "high",
"setup": {
"start_word": 2200,
"content": "官员们没注意到时间矛盾",
"setup_length": 600
},
"payoff": {
"start_word": 2800,
"content": "许七安指出时间推理的破绽",
"payoff_length": 300
},
"reaction": {
"character": "全场",
"reaction": "恍然大悟"
}
}
],
"shuang_point_density": 0.86,
"shuang_point_distribution": "前期铺垫,中后期密集爆发",
"author_thinking": {
"why_3_points": "一章3个爽点,保持密度但不过度",
"why_this_order": "先打脸建立主角地位,再智商碾压展示能力",
"intensity_curve": "medium → high → high,逐步升级"
}
}
{
"hook_types": [
{
"type_id": "H001",
"type_name": "悬念钩子",
"mechanism": "提出问题,延迟回答",
"placement": "章节末尾",
"resolution_timing": "1-3章内",
"example": {
"chapter": 4,
"hook": "能否成功制造金属钠?",
"resolution_chapter": 5
}
},
{
"type_id": "H002",
"type_name": "冲突钩子",
"mechanism": "制造冲突,不立即解决",
"placement": "章节中部或末尾",
"resolution_timing": "下一章或几章后",
"example": {
"chapter": 10,
"hook": "王捕头想找替死鬼,许七安能否坚持原则?",
"resolution_chapter": 11
}
},
{
"type_id": "H003",
"type_name": "秘密钩子",
"mechanism": "暗示秘密,逐步揭示",
"placement": "任意位置",
"resolution_timing": "长期铺垫",
"example": {
"chapter": 1,
"hook": "这个世界有儒道佛妖术士,主角如何在其中生存?",
"resolution_chapter": "持续展开"
}
},
{
"type_id": "H004",
"type_name": "承诺钩子",
"mechanism": "承诺未来的爽点",
"placement": "任意位置",
"resolution_timing": "中长期",
"example": {
"chapter": 6,
"hook": "许七安获得认可,未来会有什么发展?",
"resolution_chapter": "后续章节"
}
},
{
"type_id": "H005",
"type_name": "危机钩子",
"mechanism": "制造紧迫感",
"placement": "开篇或关键节点",
"resolution_timing": "短期",
"example": {
"chapter": 1,
"hook": "两天后流放,如何自救?",
"resolution_chapter": 6
}
}
]
}
{
"chapter_id": "chapter_004",
"hooks": [
{
"hook_id": "H_C4_001",
"type": "悬念钩子",
"position": "章节开头",
"position_word": 50,
"content": "许七安有重要线索,能否说服官员?",
"setup_elements": [
"许七安求见",
"狱卒阻拦",
"坚持要见"
],
"tension_level": "medium",
"resolution": {
"chapter": 4,
"position_word": 500,
"outcome": "成功见到官员"
}
},
{
"hook_id": "H_C4_002",
"type": "冲突钩子",
"position": "章节中部",
"position_word": 300,
"content": "陈府尹要杖责许七安,能否化解?",
"setup_elements": [
"府尹暴躁",
"怒喝'胡说八道'",
"命令拖下去"
],
"tension_level": "high",
"resolution": {
"chapter": 4,
"position_word": 500,
"outcome": "中年男人制止"
}
},
{
"hook_id": "H_C4_003",
"type": "悬念钩子",
"position": "章节末尾",
"position_word": 3400,
"content": "推理虽然有道理,但需要证据,能否成功实验?",
"setup_elements": [
"推理完成",
"官员认可",
"但需要证据"
],
"tension_level": "high",
"resolution": {
"chapter": 5,
"position_word": 2000,
"outcome": "实验成功"
}
}
],
"hook_density": 0.86,
"hook_strategy": "章首钩子吸引,章中钩子维持,章末钩子延续",
"author_thinking": {
"why_3_hooks": "保持持续吸引力",
"resolution_timing": "前两个快速满足,最后一个延续到下章",
"tension_management": "逐步升级紧张感"
}
}
{
"scene_id": "S_C4_001",
"chapter": 4,
"position_word": 0,
"length_word": 800,
"type": "Scene",
"structure": {
"goal": {
"character": "许七安",
"want": "见到府尹,提供破案线索",
"why": "这是唯一的自救机会",
"stakes": "失败则流放边陲",
"clarity": "非常明确",
"reader_awareness": "读者完全知道目标"
},
"conflict": {
"obstacles": [
{
"type": "人物阻碍",
"source": "狱卒",
"description": "不相信许七安有线索,阻拦",
"intensity": "low"
},
{
"type": "时间压力",
"source": "案件紧急",
"description": "官员们正在商议,可能随时离开",
"intensity": "medium"
}
],
"escalation": "从狱卒阻拦到差点被打",
"turning_point": "许七安坚持,狱卒妥协"
},
"disaster": {
"outcome": "成功见到官员,但陈府尹暴躁,要杖责",
"type": "部分成功+新危机",
"worse_than_expected": true,
"description": "虽然见到了,但差点被打",
"emotional_impact": "紧张升级",
"leads_to_sequel": true
}
},
"author_thinking": {
"goal_design": "明确且紧迫,读者立即理解",
"conflict_design": "层层递进,不是一次性解决",
"disaster_design": "部分成功制造新冲突,保持节奏"
}
}
{
"sequel_id": "SQ_C4_001",
"chapter": 4,
"position_word": 800,
"length_word": 400,
"type": "Sequel",
"structure": {
"reaction": {
"character": "许七安",
"emotional_response": "紧张但保持冷静",
"physical_response": "深呼吸,整理思路",
"duration": "短暂",
"description": "面对暴躁的府尹,许七安强迫自己冷静"
},
"dilemma": {
"options": [
{
"option": "直接说出推理",
"pros": "快速切入主题",
"cons": "可能被认为狂妄,继续激怒府尹"
},
{
"option": "先道歉,再慢慢说",
"pros": "缓和气氛",
"cons": "可能失去说话机会"
},
{
"option": "请求中年男人支持",
"pros": "借助权威",
"cons": "显得依赖他人"
}
],
"internal_conflict": "如何在不激怒府尹的情况下展示推理",
"time_pressure": "府尹随时可能下令",
"stakes": "这是最后的机会"
},
"decision": {
"choice": "直接展示推理,用事实说话",
"reasoning": "时间紧迫,没有迂回的余地",
"confidence_level": "高",
"becomes_next_goal": "说服官员相信推理",
"description": "许七安决定直接提出时间和重量的矛盾"
}
},
"author_thinking": {
"reaction_design": "短暂但必要,展示主角的冷静",
"dilemma_design": "真实的选择困境,增加代入感",
"decision_design": "果断决策,符合主角性格,推动情节"
}
}
{
"dialogue_id": "D_C4_001",
"scene_id": "S_C4_001",
"participants": ["许七安", "陈府尹", "中年男人"],
"function": "展示冲突和推理",
"structure": {
"opening": {
"speaker": "许七安",
"line": "大人,卑职有重要线索",
"function": "提出目标",
"subtext": "我能帮你们破案"
},
"conflict": {
"speaker": "陈府尹",
"line": "胡说八道,来人,拖下去,杖责两百",
"function": "制造障碍",
"subtext": "我不相信你"
},
"turning_point": {
"speaker": "中年男人",
"line": "等等,你说说看",
"function": "化解危机,给机会",
"subtext": "我愿意听"
},
"展示": {
"speaker": "许七安",
"lines": [
"十五万两白银,重几斤?",
"九千三百七十五斤",
"卯时二刻进城,不可能在辰时一刻抵达广南街"
],
"function": "展示推理,智商碾压",
"subtext": "我比你们聪明"
},
"reaction": {
"speaker": "中年男人",
"line": "竟然是这样!",
"function": "确认爽点效果",
"subtext": "你说得对"
}
},
"dialogue_techniques": {
"conflict_escalation": "从质疑到暴怒到制止到认可",
"information_reveal": "通过对话逐步揭示推理",
"character_voice": "府尹暴躁,中年人冷静,许七安自信",
"subtext": "表面是讨论案件,实际是权力和智慧的较量"
},
"author_thinking": {
"why_this_structure": "快速建立冲突,快速解决,保持节奏",
"character_differentiation": "通过对话展现不同性格",
"reader_engagement": "让读者跟随推理过程"
}
}
{
"decision_type": "结构决策",
"question": "为什么第6章就结束税银案?",
"thinking_chain": [
{
"step": 1,
"thought": "税银案是开局的主要冲突",
"consideration": "需要快速建立紧张感"
},
{
"step": 2,
"thought": "但这不是整个故事的主线",
"consideration": "百万字长篇需要更大的格局"
},
{
"step": 3,
"thought": "如果拖太久,读者会失去耐心",
"consideration": "网文读者需要快速满足"
},
{
"step": 4,
"thought": "6章约6万字,已经足够展示主角能力",
"consideration": "已经完成了角色建立的任务"
},
{
"step": 5,
"thought": "快速结束可以立即开启新故事",
"consideration": "保持新鲜感和节奏"
},
{
"step": 6,
"decision": "第6章结束税银案,第10章开启县衙命案",
"reasoning": "快速满足→短暂过渡→新冲突,保持节奏"
}
],
"alternative_considered": [
{
"option": "拖到20章",
"rejected_reason": "太慢,读者会流失"
},
{
"option": "3章结束",
"rejected_reason": "太快,无法充分展示主角能力"
}
],
"final_decision": "6章结束,平衡了展示和节奏"
}
{
"decision_type": "爽点设计",
"question": "如何设计第4章的智商碾压爽点?",
"thinking_chain": [
{
"step": 1,
"thought": "主角的优势是现代知识",
"consideration": "要展示现代vs古代的差距"
},
{
"step": 2,
"thought": "数学计算是最直观的差距",
"consideration": "古代人算不出来,主角秒算"
},
{
"step": 3,
"thought": "需要建立古代人的无能",
"consideration": "先让他们算不出来"
},
{
"step": 4,
"thought": "主角要表现得轻松",
"consideration": "增强碾压感"
},
{
"step": 5,
"thought": "需要旁观者的震惊反应",
"consideration": "通过他人反应放大爽点"
},
{
"step": 6,
"thought": "可以加入主角的内心吐槽",
"consideration": "'速算能力有点Low啊,你们这群古代人'"
},
{
"step": 7,
"decision": "设计'十五万两重几斤'的问题",
"reasoning": "简单但古代人算不出,主角秒答,形成强烈对比"
}
],
"setup_elements": [
"官员们讨论税银重量",
"没人能算出来",
"许七安被问到"
],
"payoff_elements": [
"许七安秒答:九千三百七十五斤",
"中年男人猛的站起身",
"内心吐槽:你们这群古代人"
],
"intensity_factors": {
"knowledge_gap": "现代数学vs古代算术",
"speed_contrast": "秒算vs算不出",
"reaction_amplification": "猛的站起身"
}
}
{
"decision_type": "节奏控制",
"question": "如何控制前10章的节奏?",
"thinking_chain": [
{
"step": 1,
"thought": "开局必须快,立即抓住读者",
"consideration": "第1章就要有危机和钩子"
},
{
"step": 2,
"thought": "但不能一直快,会让读者疲劳",
"consideration": "需要张弛有度"
},
{
"step": 3,
"thought": "第1-5章是第一波高潮(破案)",
"consideration": "快节奏,密集爽点"
},
{
"step": 4,
"thought": "第6-9章是过渡期(回家)",
"consideration": "慢节奏,日常互动,角色塑造"
},
{
"step": 5,
"thought": "第10章开启新故事(县衙命案)",
"consideration": "重新加速,制造新期待"
},
{
"step": 6,
"decision": "快-慢-快的节奏循环",
"reasoning": "符合情感曲线,避免单调"
}
],
"pacing_techniques": {
"fast_pacing": [
"短句短段",
"密集对话",
"快速场景切换",
"高频爽点"
],
"slow_pacing": [
"长句长段",
"细节描写",
"日常互动",
"角色内心"
],
"transition": [
"用钩子连接快慢",
"慢节奏中埋伏笔",
"快节奏中有喘息"
]
},
"rhythm_pattern": "快快快快快-慢慢慢慢-快"
}
{
"story_id": "dafeng_001",
"story_title": "大奉打更人",
"total_words": 5000000,
"analysis_scope": {
"start_chapter": 1,
"end_chapter": 10,
"word_count": 100000
},
"macro_structure": {
"mice_threads": [...],
"save_the_cat_beats": [...],
"emotional_arc": [...]
},
"meso_structure": {
"chapters": [
{
"chapter_id": "chapter_004",
"qichengzhuanhe": {...},
"shuang_points": [...],
"hooks": [...]
}
]
},
"micro_structure": {
"scenes": [
{
"scene_id": "S_C4_001",
"scene_sequel": {...},
"dialogue": {...}
}
]
},
"author_thinking": {
"structure_decisions": [...],
"shuang_point_designs": [...],
"pacing_controls": [...]
}
}
{
"task": "设计第4章的智商碾压爽点",
"context": {
"current_chapter": 4,
"previous_events": "许七安获得卷宗,发现疑点",
"character_state": "许七安需要说服官员",
"story_goal": "破案自救"
},
"thinking_process": [
{
"step": 1,
"question": "主角的优势是什么?",
"answer": "现代知识,特别是数学和逻辑",
"reasoning": "穿越者的核心优势"
},
{
"step": 2,
"question": "如何展示这个优势?",
"answer": "让古代人做不到的事,主角轻松做到",
"reasoning": "对比产生爽感"
},
{
"step": 3,
"question": "具体用什么知识点?",
"answer": "数学计算:十五万两白银的重量",
"reasoning": "简单但古代人算不出,主角秒答"
},
{
"step": 4,
"question": "如何增强爽感?",
"answer": "加入旁观者震惊反应和主角内心吐槽",
"reasoning": "多角度放大爽点效果"
},
{
"step": 5,
"question": "如何设置铺垫?",
"answer": "先让官员们讨论但算不出来",
"reasoning": "建立对比,突出主角能力"
}
],
"final_design": {
"setup": "官员们讨论税银重量,无人能算",
"payoff": "许七安秒答九千三百七十五斤",
"reaction": "中年男人猛的站起身",
"internal_comment": "速算能力有点Low啊,你们这群古代人"
},
"expected_effect": {
"reader_emotion": "爽、兴奋",
"character_perception": "主角很聪明",
"plot_advancement": "获得官员信任"
}
}
{
"comparison_type": "爽点设计对比",
"good_example": {
"source": "大奉打更人第4章",
"shuang_point": "智商碾压",
"setup": "官员们算不出税银重量",
"payoff": "许七安秒答",
"reaction": "中年男人猛的站起身",
"why_good": [
"铺垫充分:先建立古代人的无能",
"对比强烈:算不出vs秒答",
"反应到位:震惊的肢体语言",
"有内心吐槽:增加趣味性"
],
"intensity": "high"
},
"bad_example": {
"setup": "主角说出答案",
"payoff": "官员们点头",
"reaction": "嗯,有道理",
"why_bad": [
"没有铺垫:没有建立对比",
"反应平淡:点头太弱",
"缺少细节:没有震惊的描写",
"没有放大:缺少内心吐槽或旁观者"
],
"intensity": "low"
},
"key_differences": [
"铺垫的重要性:建立对比",
"反应的强度:肢体语言vs口头认可",
"细节的丰富度:多角度描写",
"趣味性:内心吐槽增加可读性"
]
}
步骤1: 选择优质样本
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步骤2: 宏观层标注(MICE + Save the Cat)
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步骤3: 中观层标注(起承转合 + 爽点钩子)
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步骤4: 微观层标注(Scene-Sequel + 对话)
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步骤5: 提取思考过程(CoT)
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步骤6: 生成对比样本(好vs坏)
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步骤7: 质量验证和迭代
Scene-Sequel 结构识别
爽点设计思考链
MICE 线程管理
钩子布置策略
对话设计
节奏控制
多层次融合: 结合西方结构理论(Scene-Sequel、MICE、Save the Cat)和中国网文理论(爽点、钩子、起承转合)
思考过程提取: 不仅标注"是什么",更重要的是提取"为什么这样设计"
对比学习: 通过好坏样本对比,让AI理解什么是有效的设计
可验证性: 每个层次都有明确的验证标准
方法论状态: v1.0 - 可执行
下一步: 生成示例拆解数据